wordiness
wordiness — 名詞
1. The use of more words than are needed to express an idea, especially long or for
冗長
用詞過多、囉唆的表達方式
The use of more words than are needed to express an idea, especially long or formal words, which makes speech or writing less clear and harder to follow.
The editor marked every section of his report for wordiness and crossed out whole paragraphs.
編輯將他報告中每一處冗長的部分都標記出來,並刪除整段內容。
collocation: mark/reduce/eliminate wordiness
Lan's email was so full of wordiness that her manager asked her to rewrite it.
Lan 的電子郵件過於冗長,主管要求她重寫。
pattern: so + full of + wordiness + that-clause
Good writers avoid wordiness by cutting empty phrases like "due to the fact that" from their drafts.
好的寫作者會避免冗長,刪除像是「由於……的事實」這類空洞的片語。
The professor's wordiness confused the class, who struggled to find her main point.
教授的冗長講解讓全班同學一頭霧水,大家難以找到她的重點。
Sophia revised her essay twice to remove wordiness and make every sentence clearer.
Sophia 將她的文章修改了兩次,刪除冗長之處,讓每個句子都更清晰。
- verbosity
The most direct synonym; slightly more formal and classical in tone.
- prolixity
Very formal term, used mostly of written style that is tediously long.
- long-windedness
Informal alternative; describes speech or writing that goes on for too long.
- redundancy
Emphasises unnecessary repetition of words or information, not just length.
- conciseness
The quality of expressing much in few words; the direct opposite of wordiness.
- brevity
Shortness of expression; implies efficient use of words.
- succinctness
Being clearly expressed in few words; suggests both brevity and clarity.
用法筆記
Frequently used in editing and academic writing contexts as a negative quality. The opposite of conciseness.